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One Day a Dot - existence & evolution in a nutshell

1/14/2019

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"One day a dot appeared.
And it was so excited to be there
that it burst."

     There you have it--the Big Bang in 16 words, concise and fundamentally accurate, yet simple enough for a young child to grasp. That's the bang that starts off Ian Lendler's book, "One Day a Dot: The Story of You, the Universe, and Everything."
     And it only gets better. Holding your hand all the way--from the origins of the universe, to the appearance and evolution of life on Earth, to the wonders of human innovation--this book guides you through one incredible tipping point after another.
     Lendler has really pulled off a challenge here--encapsulating, well, basically everything that ever existed on Earth, in a simple and compelling text. This book is a page-turner, with one event triggering the next, and driving the reader toward new discoveries. The language is little-kid friendly (for example, a mammal is called a "little fur-thing"), and the narrative voice feels more like a caring parent than a science instructor. After all, it's nice to feel a little warmth when being told that at one time nearly everything on the planet was destroyed by a plummeting asteroid.
     The whole evolutionary shebang is further enhanced by highly appealing and accessible art from Eisner Award-winning team Shelli Paroline and Braden Lamb. The muted color palate--a soft gray punctuated with warm blends of red, blue, yellow, and green of undefinable  hue--feels both solid and soothing. The figures are highly graphic in design, and pop off the page. Yet nothing looks computer generated. You can see the ink skipping across the paper fibers. If this isn't hand-drawn, it sure looks like it. Despite the figures' simplicity, a sense of enormous empathy goes out to our two main characters (if the book has any)--the "little fur-thing" and later, the new fur-thing without sharp teeth, or claws, or warm fur. That pensive creature with the big brain.
     Just when you thought this book couldn't get any better, it goes so far as to try and explain why the passing on of knowledge to our children is important. And then, a child appears! And that is YOU, the reader! The whole creation package tapers back down to the personal, and finally ties into a final philosophical question about the one unanswerable question--"Where did that first dot come from?" It's brilliant.
     So, what's my recommendation in a nutshell? Go get this beautiful book! It's accessible narrative nonfiction for young readers on a complex topic. It's the total package.
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Adrian Simcox - a thematically rich picture book

11/28/2018

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   As soon as I heard about Adrian Simcox Does NOT Have a Horse, by Marcy Campbell, I pre-ordered it. I could tell this book was going to be right up my alley. And it was!
   In the first place, I couldn't wait to go on this thematic journey. The story is about the freedom of imagination, the effects of socio-economic status on kids, and putting yourself in someone else's shoes. It's thematically rich. 
   In the second place, the book is illustrated by Corinna Luyken, author-illustrator of the unique and intriguing The Book of Mistakes. And it (brilliantly!) uses NEGATIVE SPACE to represent Adrian's imaginary horse.
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   Finally, although I appreciate a simple text (as is the current publishing trend), this story goes deeper. It's thoughtful. It's a literary work--for kids. The main character (Chloe) is smart, bold, and logical. As a byproduct of her outlook, she's also judgmental. When she's faced with an issue that doesn't fit into a logical box, her judgmental side kicks into high gear. She can't figure out why Adrian Simcox would say he has a horse when he doesn't. Her irritation comes to a fever pitch and she decides to expose Adrian as a liar.
   To her credit, Chloe is willing to remain open to possible explanations she hasn't thought of yet--answers that bloom in the beautiful imagination of Adrian Simcox.
   I love this book because it will make kids think. I love it because it makes ME think. I am sometimes judgmental (like Chloe), because I don't have enough information to be able to imagine someone else's perspective and unique life challenges. I appreciate this book, and wish for more like it in the world. Adrian Simcox Does NOT Have a Horse is the kind of book that can make the world a better place.
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Out of the ashes, inspiration?

11/17/2018

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   As I write this, the idyllic woodland community of Paradise, California lies in ashes--destroyed by the forest fire that swept through over a week ago. My brother escaped, abandoning  his home of 20 years when a pine tree in his neighbor's yard burst into flame. He'd spent the morning watering down his roof, hoping for the best (not packing in anticipation of the worst). Now, there were only moments to grab a couple of essentials and GO.
   The next day, he came home to us, in the Bay Area, with only his truck, computer, sleeping roll, and the clothes on his back.
   After a week and two days of limbo, we now have confirmation that his house is destroyed. The fire service posted a photo online. Other than a few deformed metal furnishings--the stove, the desk, the fireplace insert (and chimney)--not much is recognizable. Yet the layout is still there. We see the house still--in our hearts and minds.
   Here it is, nearly Thanksgiving. And we ARE thankful! Over 70 Paradise residents (and possibly many more) lost their lives under tragic circumstances.
   My brother came home!
   Out of the ashes, inspiration?
   I don't yet know if anything inspiring will come from the ashes of the Paradise disaster. But I'm searching, and I'm hopeful. And since picture books are the playground of hope, tonight I'm turning to Out of the Woods by Rebecca Bond, for solace.
   Out of the Woods is the true story of a little boy (the author's grandfather) living in his mother's big, busy, raucous, riotous sportsman's hotel beside a lake in Ontario, Canada in 1914. It's a story of history. A story of childhood memories and fascinations. And a story of a devastating forest fire that drove every living thing--human and animal alike--into the lake for a long, dark day and night while the fire raged. With images of hunter and moose standing shoulder to shoulder, knee-high in water, Out of the Woods is ultimately a story of coexistence and of setting aside differences in the face of disaster.
   My heart goes out to all the residents of Paradise. So much was lost. But I hope every survivor finds solace and inspiration in the fact that they are whole and safe--and out of the woods.

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Halloweensie 2018 ~ Two Contest Entries

10/27/2018

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Update: FEARSOME BREW received an honorable mention in the contest,
for Best Descriptive/Mood Piece!

     October is my favorite month. I love the crisp, sunny weather that reminds me of my mid-October wedding day. My older daughter's birthday is this month. And then there's Halloween! This year I will have two silver-clad alien princess to chaperone around the neighborhood. Lucky me!
     And then there's one of my all-time favorite October events...Susanna Leonard Hill's "Halloweensie" contest. This year's teeny tiny writing assignment was to produce a Halloween themed children's story no longer than 100 words, containing the words shiver, cauldron, and howl. I wrote two entries (one in poetry, one in prose)--for double the fun!
FEARSOME BREW
Costumes. Candy. Spooky scene.
Total darkness! Halloween.
 
Firelight? A pointy shadow?
Trick-or-treater peeks on tip-toe…
 
Witches! See them weary-toiling,
steaming cauldron bubble-boiling.
 
What’s inside? A fearsome brew!
Better run, for when they’re through--
POOF! They’ll put a spell on you.
 
Spooky spirits roaming, prowling.
Wild wolf pack hunger-howling.
 
Don’t just stand there stiff with fear.
Scoot-skedaddle out of here!
 
Run now, kid—and do it fast!
Witches’ spell is nearly cast…
 
“Wing of bat and specter’s shiver.
Wart of toad and chicken’s liver.
Kid, become a CANDY GIVER!”
 
Didn’t run? Well, fine and dandy.
Now the witches have your candy.

THE GRUESOME BREW-OFF
Halloween night! The time was right for the annual Gruesome Brew-Off.
Each hopeful witch made a horrible brew.
At last it was Eensie-Weensie’s turn.
With shivering fingers and knees knocking, Eensie-Weensie stood on tip-toe.
Plunk! She dunked onions into her cauldron.
Plink! She tipped toadstools into her cauldron.
Plop! She dropped dragon fruit into her cauldron (fresh from her garden).
Now what would happen?
Grumble-bumble. Blub!
Rumble-tumble. Glub!
Vile vapors rose.
A mushroom cloud puffed.
A fabulous fiery dragon flared up!
And Eensie-Weensie cried, “ENOUGH!”
The crowd howled…
and filled their bowls…
with dragon fruit-and-veggie dinner.
“Eensie-Weensie is our winner!”

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Yes! It's "Hello Lighthouse"

10/18/2018

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   I've been looking for this new book from Sophie Blackall, "Hello Lighthouse." When last I checked the online catalog, my library didn't have it yet. But a few days ago, a fly on the wall of my local library might have heard a grown woman (that would be me) utter an audible, triumphant "YES!" when she spotted this book on the shelf.
     I read it with my kids last night, and Yes! Yes! Yes! to "Hello Lighthouse." Gorgeous in every respect, from the rich blue sky and water, to the stylized ocean waves and sturdy hexagonal lighthouse, to the rhythmic poetic words, this book made a deep impression on me. As I read it aloud, I could feel it transporting me and my daughters to another time and place. That's the experience I crave in a picture book!
     I was fortunate to hear Sophie Blackall speak at the 2016 SCBWI Summer Conference and know that she's a collector of "curious and unfinished things." She loves historical objects and imagining the people who used those objects before, or in the case of "Hello Lighthouse," historical places and the lives that were lived there. It must be that kind of curiosity about and reverence for the past that made "Hello Lighthouse" possible, because the book holds so much in so few pages. It holds lives and histories and the passage of time, and presents all this to children with incomparable style and charm.
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October 01st, 2018

10/1/2018

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     Although I haven't read her book yet, I love this quote from writer/editor Calista Brill during her recent interview on The Children's Book Podcast (September 19, 2018). It goes to the heart of creating original work that also succeeds in speaking to an audience.
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"For me, writing picture books is also a way of breaking out of expected territory. As an editor, a big part of my role is taking people's idiosyncratic visions and helping them tailor them so that they're accessible to the widest possible audience. And then when I take that hat off and I work as an author, I'm the one who's bringing an idiosyncratic vision, and I'm the one who's gently pushing back against an editor. [...] It's fun to wear the other hat, and to be the voice of weirdness in that relationship."
~Calista Brill, author, and
executive editor at
First Second Books
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Loving "A Couch for Llama"

9/26/2018

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Q: What's adorable, heartfelt, hairy, and fun?
A: A Couch for Llama, by Leah Gilbert! (And did I mention, it's two stories in one?)
 
    Just look at that llama! (Can you resist him? Nope. Didn't think so.)
     This book begins with a fun-loving family and their comfy old couch which--as the central fixture in their everyday activities--gradually takes a beating. 
     The family hunts down a just-right new couch, straps it on the car roof, and away they go.
     Here's where the story splits into two...
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     Oops. The ropes fail, and (furniture fiasco!) the new couch ends up lost in a field with only one curious witness to notice--Llama.
     Don't worry. The family and Llama will cross paths, later. But before their stories converge, there's a whole lot of llama-ish exploring to be done.
     Check out this charming book. You'll want more llamas on library shelves. And you'll come away with a new appreciation for your couch.
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Infinity and Me

5/16/2018

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   Infinity and Me is a jaw-dropping blend of fact & fiction and text & art. I don't know how they did it, but the balance is perfect.
   Pretty much, you could pick up this book and read it to a child of any age, and they would probably be captivated by the art, the story, and the concept of infinity.
   You heard me... The concept of infinity. 
   I read the book to my daughter yesterday. A few minutes after we closed it and I had moved on, I noticed she was reading it again. Somehow, it drew her right back in. That's a successful book!
   How does the author, Kate Hosford, do it? How did she create a contemplative story about such a vast and complex concept--and keep it fresh and engaging for young readers?
   Here's the breakdown on her interesting approach:
   We have a girl (Uma) with new red shoes who looks up at the stars and asks a big question--how can I imagine 'infinity'? Remember those red shoes--they're important. They ground the story in the real world and serve as a structural framework, since they come back in at the end. Those red shoes are actually a nice little set of bookends.
   All through the middle of the story, Uma asks various people how they imagine infinity. She has a chance to try out all their definitions and see if they work for her.
   In the final pages, Uma has a personal experience that becomes her 'a-ha!' moment. She comes to realize what 'infinity' means to her when her grandmother, a source of infinite love, notices and compliments Uma's shoes.
   In a perfect circular ending, the two end the story looking at the stars together.
   So, structure serves as an indispensable aid to conveying this difficult topic, as does grounding the story with real-world objects (the shoes) and relationships/emotions.
   Add to this the careful attention lavished on this book by the art director and illustrator, and you have a final piece that is beautiful, intriguing, delightful, informative--and important.

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“Jabari Jumps” and “Green Pants”

4/24/2018

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     Kenneth Kraegel is shooting to the top of my favorites scale. I’ve always had his King Arthur’s Very Great Grandson on my list. And now there’s the triumph of Green Pants!  
     What is it about Kevin’s style and sensibility that I like so much? Hmm. There’s a special, simple charm in his characters’ expressions, and I kind of love their bendy, noodle-like, exuberant movements. I just heard an interview with him where he talks about including a lot of foliage in his books—to add a sense of natural wonder—even if they’re set in an urban environment. It’s true! Many pages in Green Pants are edged with soft green-and-yellow leaves in geometric patterns, all meticulously hand drawn. I feel the work, thought, and care that went into making this book.
     Both Green Pants by Kenneth Kraegel and Jabari Jumps by Gaia Cornwall have got that “je ne se quoi” that makes me fall head over heels for a book. I happened to come across them both in my local library, on the same trip. Both books have got a LOT going for them and a lot in common…and both are going into my mentor-text file.
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     Here’s what I think the books have in common:

  • Both books are deeply thoughtful and designed to help kids manage strong emotions—in one case, the jumbled desire and anxiety that comes with jumping off a diving board; in the other case, the condition of being inflexibly attached to a beloved object.
  • At the same time, these stories are fun and realistic and sprinkled with gentle humor. Overall, they just have a great, even tone that takes the reader on a smooth journey.
  • Both books represent children of color, and do it seamlessly, without any sense of it being forced in order to satisfy the marketplace.
  • What I admire most is the way these authors incorporate watchful, caring parents into the stories, yet maintain an utterly true and respectful child’s-eye-view. Sophie’s Squash does it. And one of my all-time-favorite un-sung stories--The Queen of France—does it. There’s nothing easy about including parents in a picture book, and I really admire what Cornwall and Kraegel have achieved here.
  • Finally, these books are great for boys! They help kids understand strong emotions…AND succeed at being super-appealing to male readers.
 
I’m glad these charming books are on the shelves. They have a lot of heart and delight to offer their young readers.
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50 Precious Words Challenge, 2018!

3/1/2018

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    Oh happy day! It's time again for Vivian Kirkfield's "50 Precious Words" challenge, in which writers compose a complete (beginning, middle, end) children's story--not exceeding 50 words in length.
     I'm going nonfiction with my entry this year. And of course, poetic. (Because I can't help it.)

Magnify Me!
 
Mallard swims and braves the weather
in a raincoat made of feather.
 
Feather? What a silly coat!
Can it really help him float?
 
…Magnify me!
What do you see?
 
Tiny branching barbs and hooks
offer more than handsome looks--
trapping heat and blocking wet.
 
…How much closer can you get?


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