2017 Valentiny Contest Entry

News Flash:
I'm thrilled to say that this entry placed THIRD in the contest!
Thanks to everyone who visited the site, enjoyed my story, and voted.

     What could be more fun than entering one of Susanna Leonard Hill's mini writing contests? This year, the story entries for the "Valentiny" contest must be 214 words or less and include a character who is confused.
     At first I was, like, "Um. Nope. I can't do this." But then inspiration struck...and I had a blast composing my entry. Thanks, Susanna! Your contests are always fun and inspiring.

VALENTINE CRUSH

I hope you’ll be my valentine.
You’re not so sure? I see.
You wonder why the card I gave
is crushed and crumpled?
                                                         Gee…
 
I fashioned it with you in mind--
with paper, sequins, glue--
then gently walked it to your house.
The next part’s strange, but true…
 
I tried to place it in your box.
(Yes, that’s what I had planned.)
Just then, a sentimental ape
removed it from my hand!
 
She lumbered down the street so fast
(your note crushed in her fist).
She seemed to think she’d won my heart
but in a crazy twist
 
a magpie spied your valentine
as ruby sequins flashed.
It stole her heart! She stole your card,
flew far away…
                                   then crashed.
 
A smitten chipmunk found your note
and stuffed it down a hole.
It would have stayed there--disappeared--
except a lovelorn mole
 
insisted it was in his way
and swept it from his floor.
It popped up at my feet. What luck!
I bolted to your door.
 
Remember, it’s the thought that counts,
so don’t look so confused.
This valentine’s a fine design
it’s just a little…used.
 
And anyhow, it demonstrates
the kind of love I feel.
This crushed-up valentine is proof--
my crush on you is real!